The Oars, Forgotten

The grass is rough underfoot as I sit in

an old lawn chair by the river. Birdsong

swells: mynahs, harsh crows, and the peep,

peep of a river-bird I cannot see.

It’s turning cold, and the sky has two colours.

Behind the thin clouds, the blueness is giving

way to a delicate violet. On the horizon, an

orange band shrinks behind a line of dark trees.

Upriver, the throaty growl of a ferry muscles off the

dirt-brown river and, glancing up, two narrow rowboats

appear, coxed fours, slicing the water neatly, trailed by

an aluminium coach launch with a tiny outboard motor.

All three are drifting against the tide. The coach

beckons to the rowers. All faces are turned to him

and the oars, forgotten, jut out at random angles.

A chorus of frozen gesture, drifting in unison.

Then a magpie hops across

the lawn at my feet and

stops. It studies me with unsettling

intelligence; I tilt my head.

I look up, and

the rowers have left nothing

but ripples.


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12 responses to “The Oars, Forgotten”

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Thanks, Christopher! I’m glad you liked it.

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      Stef

      Thanks, Tina – I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  2. Ezekiel Fish Avatar

    It sounds peaceful. Beautiful!

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Thanks, Ezekiel! It’s a nice spot.

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      Stef

      Thanks, Gwynne! I’m working on my imagery (among other things).

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Thanks, Devonne!

  3. Ahmed Avatar

    This post paints a clear picture. The imagery is vivid. I feel like I’m there. The details are specific and sensory. I can hear the birds. I can see the sky. It’s very well-written.

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Hi, Ahmed. It’s a pleasant spot and I’m lucky to live where I do. Thanks for dropping by.

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