Collage on an open notebook spread with handwritten text, showing an anatomical heart drawn over blackberry leaves on the right page and a monarch butterfly above a pear and two pomegranates on the left, surrounded by air plants and inked script.

After the Storm

In the afternoon heat, as the humidity climbs, and redoubles,

and a bank of pewter cloud crowds the horizon, muscles forward

from the south, dimming the light, and as the wind shifts;

cooler, blustery, I’m in the right place—have made my way here—

deliberately—

to witness the storm.

Outside the bookshop there was a man with a look—

haunted, opaque—now he’s here

in the village square,

pacing in the rising wind that agitates the trees and strips

the leaves to swirl in the air like snow, and he stops,

facing the oncoming storm, to make an elaborate sequence

of gestures that begin above his head, going all the way down

to where he presses both palms

into the earth.

When I look again, he is spinning clockwise

on a broken office chair, face heavenward.

He stands and again gestures, on the opposite side of the square,

and this time he finishes with a two-handed flourish, sweeping twin arcs

in the leaf-beds at his feet. I sense but do not understand

the symbolism, yet see he has addressed

the cardinal directions.

Now he has finished,

the storm hits.

The rain comes in sheets, fat droplets smacking into the ground,

and the man crosses the road, unhurried, melting into the rain, as

the wind snaps branches from the trees and a huge bough

crashes to earth from the mother-fig tree. People huddle under

shop eaves as hail cracks a hard staccato on tin roofs,

deafening the world. Then, its fury spent, the storm lopes off.

The sky is released and changed. An orange haze rises

from the horizon to blend with the delicate violet-blue

of now-quiescent clouds and a single crow flies south

to north. If the man were here, he might tell me what

it means, but although I look, I cannot see him.

Night falls. The hiss of cars on wet asphalt returns,

and people reappear. There is music in the street now,

and people are dancing. I am writing and a girl asks

whether my journaling is creative or personal.

I don’t know what to say, because it is none of those things.

It is wind and rain—a secret magic I cannot know,

nothing more.

I see the man and run after him. He is wary, but I

learn his name, and when I mention the Archangel,

beloved of God, he brightens and agrees to talk.

I saw your gestures and they looked like prayers, I say.

They were, he says.

What do you believe in? I ask.

I believe in

the Light Horse,

the Dark Horse,

he says.

In Light

versus Dark,

in the Holy Spirit.

But that is all he will say—

he drinks the music,

and only wants to dance.

And when he does,

he bends as a sapling

in the wind,

hands tracing

invisible lines—

the Light Horse,

the Dark,

the secret magic

of the air


Start Here → Next: [Under the Bridge] · [The Night is Young]· [The hill]

Collage on an open notebook spread with handwritten text, showing an anatomical heart drawn over blackberry leaves on the right page and a monarch butterfly above a pear and two pomegranates on the left, surrounded by air plants and inked script.

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