Open notebook with handwritten observations, hand-cut palm and blue flower stickers, and a loose illustration of Alice in Wonderland with playing cards, resting on a background of scribbled sketches and notes.

Little Hooks

As though there were two moons:

one light, the other dark

or a falling to the centre of the earth

that over time shifts axis

but is still falling.

The sea rises like a moth

to pale light and so

drowns the land

before heaving toward

the moon—

a cool, white gravity

free of undertow,

free of wrack.

In the mind, splinters—

remembered glances, words;

small, piercing betrayals;

have lodged, are lodgers—

little hooks; they refuse to leave.

outside, spring’s warmth

has coaxed the jacaranda

to bloom. I watch

through the window.


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20 responses to “Little Hooks”

  1. Raisa Reza Avatar

    Hi, Stef! Have been skimming through your writings for some days. Your style is quite unique! I will explore more. And loved the visuals you make! How can people be so creative? You are a great artist and poet.

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      Stef

      Hi Raisa, and thank you for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed the poems. I’m not sure I’m unique, I just write what I write and try to inhabit whatever voice is speaking in a given piece. Sometimes it’s mine, and that’s a lot easier! I do hope you enjoy going through the archives. Perhaps you’ll find a hidden gem, who knows? Cheers, Stef.

      1. Raisa Reza Avatar

        Your sketches are awesome too! I don’t know how do you get these unique ideas. I’m glad I discovered you through the like lists of my posts. Best of luck. Write more and sketch more and do share with us!

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          Stef

          Ha ha, I’m terrible at drawing! When I start something (like a poem), it is usually bad and boring. But if I keep working on it, it slowly becomes better and more interesting. The first draft of ‘The Ferry and the Tree’ was truly awful but I improved it, slowly. I will try to improve my drawing. Cheers!

          1. Raisa Reza Avatar

            Not at all! You have expertise in drawing imagery both in poems and sketches. I’ve read that poem too. A good one as usual!

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            Stef

            Thank you Raisa, you are very kind.

  2. deeshabal Avatar

    steff …Great posts!!! Good luck for more!!

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Thanks, Deeshabal! I’m happy you like my poems. There will be more soon!

  3. Jason 📚👀Owen Avatar

    Stef been loving your posts. Keep them coming!

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Cheers, Jason! I’m on it, mate.

  4. mickeycharles Avatar

    Amazingly creative can so relate to the small betrayals in life.

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by.

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Thanks, Dominic! I’m glad you liked it.

  5. veerites Avatar

    Of course, good type. Why rose then? Veerites is a pen name. I am Prof Rajendra or Raj

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      Hello, and welcome, Raj! I enjoyed reading your piece on humility, and am glad you liked my poem! I agree they are different – in fact, some of them are very strange – I like them, and hope you do too 🙂

  6. veerites Avatar

    Dear Stef
    It was a different experience to read your post.
    Thanks for liking my post ‘Humility’. ❤️💗🌹

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      You’re welcome, veerites, and I hope it was the good type of ‘different’, not the bad one. Cheers!

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