Stuck Out the Back

This one is about an ordinary moment that wasn’t ordinary at all—a brief encounter with something that couldn’t be unseen

The shop smells of antiseptic

and meat. Beyond the translucent

plastic door is the workroom

floor with banks of noisy machines.

One of them goes quiet,

and there is a worker, all in white,

with a white hairnet, and his hand

is somewhere inside

the machine. He is pale and

unmoving, but it is his eyes

I notice. People go to him.

Some stay, others hurry off and,

all the while, his face

is a waxy mask of

shock.

I’m frozen too—

I want to call an

ambulance but

someone probably has.

I think.

Then another someone

closes the white

metal door and

cuts off

the scene. I look around

the storefront—

somehow alien, now—

and realise I am the only one who

has seen and who isn’t

shopping.

I just stand there,

but my mind is still in

the room out the back.


This poem is part of the counter field.


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4 responses to “Stuck Out the Back”

  1. Jason 📚👀Owen Avatar

    Tried to email you something but I guess I’m not seeing It

    1. Stef Avatar
      Stef

      I’m on Insta: counterfield.blog

  2. Stef Avatar
    Stef

    Thanks for the thoughtful response, Jason. Stuck Out the Back is a stillness piece; it speaks to the quiet power and persistence of memory. I’m glad it resonated with you; that kind of resonance is precisely what the poem is about.

  3. Jason 📚👀Owen Avatar

    Stef—

    This one stopped me. That moment in the shop—so ordinary, then suddenly not. You captured the shift so clearly, the way everything changes but no one says a word. I felt that emptiness, that frozen place where you’re the only one who saw, and nothing feels the same after. You didn’t overdo it, and that’s what made it hit harder. Thank you for writing it.

    —Jason

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